diff -r f507feede89a -r 09a1c134465b web/wp-admin/credits.php
--- a/web/wp-admin/credits.php	Wed Dec 19 12:35:13 2012 -0800
+++ b/web/wp-admin/credits.php	Wed Dec 19 17:46:52 2012 -0800
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 		if ( ! is_array( $results ) )
 			return false;
 
-		set_site_transient( 'wordpress_credits_' . $locale, $results, 86400 ); // One day
+		set_site_transient( 'wordpress_credits_' . $locale, $results, DAY_IN_SECONDS );
 	}
 
 	return $results;
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is already making your website better, faster, and more attractive, just like you!' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>