--- a/web/wp-admin/freedoms.php	Wed Dec 19 12:35:13 2012 -0800
+++ b/web/wp-admin/freedoms.php	Wed Dec 19 17:46:52 2012 -0800
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is already making your website better, faster, and more attractive, just like you!' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>